Please read Alexis's essay and respond to the questions.
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Please Read Danielle's essay and respond to the questions.
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Please read Brendan's essay and respond to the questions.
1. What are the three strongest parts of this essay? Think about both language choices, stories told, and development of themes.
2. What, if anything, gives you pause about the piece? Where did you do a mental double-take?
3. How is the writer using research to enhance his/her writing? What are your suggestions for further research?
4. What would you like to know more about? How should the writer expand this piece? Are there things that are not as important that the writer might think about taking out?
5. What seems to be the writer's tone? Is that consistent throughout?
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